SuperSnap Bus Comic

SuperSnap Bus Comic Trial

This didn't quite go to plan. As you can see the double rear wheels ruined my original layout plan. I'm not worrying about how the doors open at this point. It could have just one door that pops out and slides across so the elderly woman boarding doesn't get cleaved in two. also some of the hutt buses only have a front door.

I am going to have to take My hero bubble off the scene and give it its own frame. 

I think i will also crop the left side of the first scene, and see how far i can extend that scene as a backdrop for the alarm scene. 

Flat map

Flat map on bus

For some reason the frames and the halftones in the bubble boxes have gotten thicker as I shrunk this even though they were rasterized. They definitely need fixing for the final.

The elder woman, although life sized, appears lost in her frame.

Alarm could be a bit smaller and more diagonal perhaps.

I could apply the pink or orange half tone to my hero. but I like how it is sitting.

Bus Comic Final Bright

Bus Comic Final Dull

As per kristens insisting, a dulled out version. I think it it has less impact, but the colours are more real life, for the comic book style though, perhaps oversaturated colours are more appropriate.